MELEENA’S ADVENTURES REVIEWS
Listed below are reviews of Treasure Of The Umbrunna and other significant events for the story.
FROM GOODREADS:
Jan 21, 2016 Stephanie Cress rated it it was amazing FIVE STARS
I read a LOT of fantasy (and write a bit, too). Treasure of the Umbrunna, is a classic idea with a fresh and fast-paced voice. I could not stop turning pages! Fred Rayworth writes without clutter. Dialogue and action with just a hint of exposition make for a clear and well-told story. Anyone who enjoys traditional fantasy will love the ride on Meleena’s first adventure. I look forward to next one.
Aug 14, 2017 Carol Mccoy rated it really liked it FOUR STARS
This is a wonderful read for all Fantasy book lovers! It reminded me somewhat of the Hobbit or The Talisman….I thoroughly enjoyed it and can’t wait for volume II of Meleena’s adventures!
FROM AMAZON:
4.0 out of 5 stars I enjoyed the story
By Linda Weber on February 10, 2018
Format: Kindle Edition
This was my first fantasy novel ever so I don’t have anything to offer for comparison. I enjoyed the story, even if the alternate world the author created was a little hard to stomach at times! His creatures were innovative and unusual to say the least. Rayworth is a credible writer and the book was interesting enough to keep me engaged and reading. The characters were odd and weird in an endearing way and I actually cared about them by the time I got through the book. The author used a nice surprise ending which put a good finishing touch on the story and left the door open for other books to come in the series. If you don’t know if you are aa fan of fantasy this would be a good book to cut your teeth on.
Sometimes I felt like it was more YA than I like but even then it was not a put off. Like I said, I don’t have anything to compare it to but it was a credible book and a well told story.
5.0 out of 5 stars original
By Robin Landry TOP 1000 REVIEWER on February 5, 2016
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Treasure of the Umbrunna is a great adventure story, with one tough, resourceful, and mysterious lead character by the name of Meleena, a girl who can take care of herself. Meleena lives in a part of town that houses many different characters, including a half-insect tavern owner who’s her best friend. This is fantasy in the vein of the Stars Wars Cantina, with realistic creatures and humans(with various mixtures) where magic still lives and right not it’s busy destroying the world. Meleena is convinced by a four-eyed wizard to find a pearl of great price, with the help of four very different characters who are experts at surviving their world. Meleena thinks she can do the job by herself, but when told of the dangers of this adventure, reluctantly takes on the four men, and off they go to find their fortune.
While this is a fantasy, a genre I’m not all that well versed in, I would say that this is not a book for young people. The themes are very adult, with Melleena being somewhat loose in her morals, at least sexually. Orphaned at a young age on the streets in a tough world, give her an edge that would not be suitable for teens. I actually think this is a shame, but Meleena is so likable, such a good role model otherwise, but again, there are some very adult themes running through the book, so adults only.
Fred Hayworth is an excellent writer with loads of imagination who had created a world that’s both new and realistic which is the hard part when writing fantasy. As fantastic as your world is, the reader has to see the underlying rules to believe in it. Fred’s world works. His characters are believable and I loved Meleena. If you enjoy a good fantasy novel, this book fits the bill. I would love to see a continuation of Meleena’s world, so I’m hoping Fred keeps writing about her.
5.0 out of 5 stars A Must Read!
By Carol Davis Luceon June 15, 2016
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TREASURE OF THE UMBRUNNA is a riveting story of ancient magic and adventure in a land that defies the imagination. Meleena, a loner with larceny in her heart, teams up with a fierce warrior, a dwarf, a healer, and an elf, to find a precious pearl that could save their kingdom. Author Fred Rayworth takes us on a rousing journey into a world of wicked sorcery, where an array of mutated monstrosities rule and savage those who dare to trespass. This gripping debut fantasy will leave you wanting more.
5.0 out of 5 stars Very entertaining! Bring on the next adventure!
By Anneon January 24, 2016Format: Paperback| Verified Purchase
This story is exciting, humorous, and thoroughly entertaining! After reading the story, I also purchased this book as a birthday gift for my adult son. Since reading it, we have been sharing our picks for movie stars to play each character. I am looking forward to Maleena’s next adventure. It would be nice to see (hear) this come out on an audio book, and I will buy the e-book too, so I can keep it on my Kindle!
5.0 out of 5 starsThis story kept my interest from beginning to the end. A good read.
By Amazon Customer on December 19, 2016
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A good read. Kept my interest.
An interesting fanasty story.
Looking forward to more from this author. I enjoyed it.
5.0 out of 5 starsFive Stars
By Carol S McCoyon January 21, 2016
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Great fantasy novel! Can’t wait for the next one!
5.0 out of 5 starsGreat book, definitely worth reading.
By Amazon Customer on January 3, 2017
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I really enjoyed this book. The descriptors of the characters was so detailed that I actually could envision them. The shocking ending left me thinking that there may be a sequel – I hope!
5.0 out of 5 stars
Anyone who enjoys traditional fantasy will love the ride on Meleena’s first adventure
By Stephanie C.on November 27, 2015
Format: Paperback
I read a LOT of fantasy (and write a bit, too). Treasure of the Umbrunna, is a classic idea with a fresh and fast-paced voice. I could not stop turning pages! Fred Rayworth writes without clutter. Dialogue and action with just a hint of exposition make for a clear and well-told story. Anyone who enjoys traditional fantasy will love the ride on Meleena’s first adventure. I look forward to next one.
5.0 out of 5 Great Escape
By Ann Marquezon September 8, 2017
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“Treasure of the Umbrunna” is my first ‘fantasy’ novel. Actually, I rarely allow myself time to read any type of fiction at all, but I’m so glad I took time for this one. I enjoyed every bit of it – the storyline, the characters, the vivid imagery, and most of all, the adventure.Looking forward to reading the next one. Adventure on, Mr. Rayworth! Well done.
5.0 out of 5 starsFred Rayworth’s
Treasure of the Umbrunna” is a great read. I don’t usually read this genre
By mathphilosopher on February 15, 2017
Format: Kindle Edition
Fred Rayworth’s “Treasure of the Umbrunna” is a great read. I don’t usually read this genre, so I don’t have much to compare it to. Imagine Wizard of Oz plus Goonies plus Princess Bride. It flows really well and so even though it’s very long and detailed, it goes by fast. loved the team of characters and the mythology. There are lots of great twists and turns. I will definitely read this author again.
5.0 out of 5 stars
Very entertaining fantasy!
By L. T. A. Kleinon January 7, 2017
Format: Kindle Edition
I enjoyed reading this from the first to the last page. Can’t wait for the next Meleena novel! Interresting story line, appealing characters, humour, fantastic creatures, described in such detail you can just see them before you. I would gladly recommend this to anyone who loves fantasy!
5.0 out of 5 stars
Good Job Fred!
By Larry G Moodyon March 6, 2016
Format: Paperback
Treasure of the Umbrunna kept me on the “edge of my seat” with non-stop action and unpredictable surprises. Meleena’s adventure is immersive and complex; with sub-plots galore and just enough unanswered questions to keep my curiosity piqued! Can’t wait for book 2!
Other stuff:
A recent Facebook post:
Liz Hindes Sutton Not usually a fan of fantasy. But enjoyed the read. I recommended it to my library. It’s now available in Oklahoma City’s metropolitan library on line!
Fred Rayworth Wow Liz. Thank you so much! That is awesome!